Umm... with your pages and the grammer, you seem to be breaking this rule quite often.
Please write everything in proper grammar and spelling so they are understandable.
So you could either quit this wiki or I could spellcheck your pages for you. (because to be honest, the only ones on this wiki for the past few days have been you and I.)
I meant i could either do a spellcheck of your pages for you (don't worry, i wont touch anything major) OR you could quit the wiki, as in you have a desicion.
Hello there~! ^-^ Sorry to bother you, but may I add my fanon brands to your brand page please? I accidentally put them there but took them out again because I wanted to ask you first.
So I was wondering if me and my crew (Animeeditor and Fiya) could edit the already existing pages of the Constellation pages for our characters? In turn, when I create the pages for the other signs, you can feel free to edit them for any characters you want! Does that sound good?
Hello, I'm new here, I would like to say hi, and also ask you if I could put my brands at you're brands article, I'm still working on they're official pages and the 4 first coords for each one, but I'll post it soon as possible!
Thanks ^^ I was asking, because I saw you talking to other persons that didn't asked you to put they're brands in this article, so I prefer ralking to you and ask you permition.
If I may critque? I think your story has a good start, but honestly Nana's abilities don't belong in an Aikatsu setting. Aikatsu is more so just normal girls, and the only magical aspect is the changing. You could argue that the auras are magical, but its something you feel from an idol, and a stage illusion when preforming. So while it could possibly work in other shows, it isn't something really possible here. Also, I hope Mana's aura doesn't start that busy! Its fine for her to gain bits and pieces over time (since it happens in the show), but auras start off really basic (see how Ichigo only had flowers when she just debuted). I would start with either the chain or the flowers at first, and growing her aura as she goes!
I just want to send this off by saying its possible to have a unique fc/oc without having to take things from canon characters! To be frankly honest, and ability and a power are pretty much the same thing. It seems both Naru and Mana were born with their natural ability to see the colors of songs, so Mana is, unfortunately, a bit of a rip off. I think as a whole how she can describe things like the colors of music is ok (and interesting), but you dont have to call it an ability!
I was just wanting to make a character more original than the others,I was wanted Nana to be unique not like the others,I have this idea coming in my head after seeing Puri Para and remind the season of PR and I want my character to be original. But if you have some ideas you can show your idea or if I find some good ideas I will show them! But I will nit give powers to the other girls! Because I want Nana to be unique!
I think not giving the other girls powers is a really good idea! As for Mana, the only thing I would change or do with her myself is to remove how it says its a 'power", and just have it as its something that she does, if that makes much sense? If you have any ideas, Id be glad to hear them!
Its not Mana but its Nana,but I use the word power,because I was thinking (if Aikatsu has some like of magic things like an Aura or a transformation why not they are not magical girls?) I was thinking about a thing like it so I use the word power.
Oh, sorry for the typo then! And yeah, I def understand that because to a lot of people Aikatsu counts as a magical girl anime. But aside from the magical-like clothing transformations, its not really a magical girl anime. Especially since the transformations are written off as just the technology they have, and technology isnt magic Im afraid :<
I think if you wrote off power or ability, then Nana's seeing the color of music thing would be fine! But I would make it just a personality quirk of hers <:
A quirk is apeculiarityofaction,behavior,orpersonality;mannerism. So if you were to cut out the name of ability, then it would make sense, you know? It would still be part of her character, but as part of her personality and how she behaves. Does that make sense?
Hi MikuHatsune!!! I'm Lightxv.xiong although my alternative name is Light15XV, I created a new series of mine called Aikatsu! Pure Remnant! It is a first new series of mine that focuses on design and idol activites. I'm currently new to doing wikis and I appreciate improving more in the future and getting tips :3 May we be friends~
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